An Introduction, to Perfection

I’m reading a lot over break…. a lot of 5 paragraph essays. This introduction to a paper stands out as, quite possibly, perfection. Well done, Heather H. (8th period). 

Have you ever wondered what the world would be like now without a certain person’s influence on it? How technology would ensue, or maybe how people would be viewed? How about Walt Disney? Walt Disney changed the world by creating many of the first things for the animation industry to utilize, influence other artists, and cause an enormous impact on mass media. How could one man possibly obtain such a stellar reputation? By accomplishing many of the first things the animation industry had ever seen, Walt Disney has been the most influential American in Entertainment of the twentieth century.